Draft summary letter to CC

I attach a summary response to the CC proposals.  Can people look at quickly and let me have comments by early evening.  If your comments are substantial please consider putting them in a separate note for the website that I can reference — I only have time for limited changes before tonight’s deadline.  It would help greatly if you could offer specific wording rather than saying, for example “it ought to say more about the phosphates issue”

summ responses